tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16614510.post4073809854274905552..comments2024-01-27T12:22:30.839+00:00Comments on Headphonaught's Nanolog: The Bible in Five Statementsweareallghostshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00420173939467547483noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16614510.post-2980329621196341862009-12-31T11:55:46.862+00:002009-12-31T11:55:46.862+00:00Eternal, holy, loving God.
Fills the void with per...Eternal, holy, loving God.<br />Fills the void with perfect Creation.<br />First man and woman join Satan's rebellion against God.<br />Jesus becomes the Way to reconciliation with God.<br />God longs to be our Father and give us an eternal future.<br /><br />Could become...<br /><br />God<br />Fills void<br />Man rebels against<br />Jesus way to reconciliation<br />God longs to be ours<br /><br />The exercise is in stripping away the very explanatory words you readily admit to adding. <br /><br />Thanks for participating!<br /><br />Txweareallghostshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00420173939467547483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16614510.post-23705188132269622862009-12-31T11:12:53.278+00:002009-12-31T11:12:53.278+00:00The difficulty I have had is being as brief and si...The difficulty I have had is being as brief and simply eloquent yet thought-provoking. I keep adding explanatory words as in this example:<br /><br />Eternal, holy, loving God.<br />Fills the void with perfect Creation.<br />First man and woman join Satan's rebellion against God.<br />Jesus becomes the Way to reconciliation with God.<br />God longs to be our Father and give us an eternal future.<br /><br />Sounds more like one of the "sermons" J is trying to avoid! But I think it illustrates how good the original is.Angus Mathiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04832768234744470449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16614510.post-84794504531144813302009-12-27T17:58:02.782+00:002009-12-27T17:58:02.782+00:00Thanks J and thanks Dad... I would, however, stres...Thanks J and thanks Dad... I would, however, stress the importance in having a go yourself. <br /><br />I would not consider myself gifted with words... certainly not the way JD & Stewart are... and I had a go. <br /><br />So go on... give it a try. If you like what you have... post it on here.<br /><br />Txweareallghostshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00420173939467547483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16614510.post-78308041431615272362009-12-27T15:36:50.413+00:002009-12-27T15:36:50.413+00:00I agree with J that it is brilliant. I would think...I agree with J that it is brilliant. I would think that it is difficult to make as good an effort and my thoughts have been tweaking round this original and ending up expanding without improving. <br /><br />It is a great sermon "skeleton" as well as a good way of remembering the essentials. If it is ok, I would like to keep and use it suitably attributed.Angus Mathiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04832768234744470449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16614510.post-19340814567165574922009-12-26T12:15:31.005+00:002009-12-26T12:15:31.005+00:00That's a brilliant effort, T. Spot on and more...That's a brilliant effort, T. Spot on and more profound than many sermons I've heard!<br /><br />Get it on to Cafepress!<br /><br />JJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03972958288698839815noreply@blogger.com